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得分要點(diǎn)
1、字跡清晰。
每段首尾的字跡必須非常清楚。其實(shí)閱卷老師無(wú)論看什么作文，他的重點(diǎn)一般都是放在每段的首尾，首尾必須吸睛。
2、前后呼應(yīng)，主題升華。
有些亂七八糟八竿子打不著的就不要亂說(shuō)，讀后續(xù)寫(xiě)一般都劃出了提示詞，這些提示詞其實(shí)都是續(xù)寫(xiě)的線索，必須串聯(lián)使文章緊湊。但最重要的就是主題升華，弘揚(yáng)人性的真善美。
3、高級(jí)詞匯怎么放？
讀后續(xù)寫(xiě)的詞匯得分點(diǎn)除了一般的名詞、形容詞、副詞之外，最重要的是高級(jí)動(dòng)詞！因?yàn)槔m(xù)寫(xiě)側(cè)重?cái)⑹?，里面涉及到的人的?dòng)作是非常多的，比如cry，這就過(guò)于簡(jiǎn)單，要側(cè)重細(xì)節(jié)描寫(xiě)，to show, not to tell, 高分作文一般就會(huì)寫(xiě)，With shoulders shivering, her tears cannot help streaming down her face.她的雙肩哆哆嗦嗦，眼淚情不自禁的從她臉上流下來(lái)。所以類(lèi)似表現(xiàn)喜怒哀樂(lè)的情況，都要事先做好準(zhǔn)備（注意，兩三句即可，但這兩三句一定要是最佳句，如句式，高級(jí)詞匯都要是最好的，熟記于心，一直用即可），側(cè)重刻畫(huà)描寫(xiě)，臉，手，眼睛都可以描寫(xiě)。
4、關(guān)于情節(jié)，提倡一波兩折。
雖說(shuō)讀后續(xù)寫(xiě)沒(méi)有字?jǐn)?shù)限制，但是考慮到字的大小與整體篇幅限制，一般兩個(gè)波折即可，如事態(tài)變壞一個(gè)轉(zhuǎn)折，最后事態(tài)好轉(zhuǎn)一個(gè)轉(zhuǎn)折即可。側(cè)重人物矛盾與心理沖突，比如兩人之間的猜忌，后重歸于好，類(lèi)似小學(xué)生作文。
寫(xiě)作技巧
1.從原文中整理出3～5個(gè)小的情節(jié)，從中推理出續(xù)寫(xiě)的主要情節(jié)。情節(jié)不能自己讀后憑空想象，按自己看過(guò)的小說(shuō)、電視劇情節(jié)適當(dāng)推理。
2. 根據(jù)兩個(gè)段首語(yǔ)來(lái)推理情節(jié)。段首語(yǔ)往往決定著這一整段話的走向，不可銜接不當(dāng)。
3. 根據(jù)關(guān)鍵詞來(lái)推理情節(jié)發(fā)展。原文中關(guān)鍵詞一般會(huì)在十個(gè)左右，也并不是都能用上的。有一部分關(guān)鍵詞對(duì)于預(yù)測(cè)下面的情節(jié)是很有導(dǎo)向意義的，因而會(huì)在后文中用的到。
關(guān)鍵詞中，有關(guān)于情感的連接的有關(guān)于時(shí)間的指向的，有關(guān)鍵句線索反復(fù)出現(xiàn)的，要做的，是串聯(lián)前面的伏筆后面是否有所體現(xiàn)，前文的人物關(guān)系是否把握，以及把握后是否在續(xù)寫(xiě)中使矛盾凸現(xiàn)既而解決，這些都是決定了分?jǐn)?shù)高低的因素。
一般答案是可以體現(xiàn)這些伏筆與連接的，如果嚴(yán)重偏題，首先要考慮是否讀懂文章，其次，杜絕天馬行空的續(xù)寫(xiě)，需要回歸文本，不需要與標(biāo)準(zhǔn)答案一致，但要體現(xiàn)前文的伏筆，線索，轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系，這方面考察的是理解能力與閱讀預(yù)判能力，需多練習(xí)以提升，加分項(xiàng)是主題升華，雞湯加持無(wú)需多言。
4. 根據(jù)故事需要，合理地豐富、有條理地增加一些次要的情節(jié)。比如人物的表情、動(dòng)作、心理活動(dòng)，細(xì)節(jié)描寫(xiě)等。
5. 根據(jù)生活常識(shí)或者社會(huì)經(jīng)驗(yàn)，豐富文章的細(xì)節(jié)。不可鬧出不合常理的笑話。成為改卷老師緊張改卷期間的談資。
6. 平時(shí)多練習(xí)續(xù)寫(xiě)微作文，找到自己所能掌控的語(yǔ)句長(zhǎng)度。7句*20詞=140詞，8句*20詞=160詞，10句*15詞=150詞。其實(shí)續(xù)寫(xiě)并不是很可怕，一篇讀后續(xù)寫(xiě)10～15句，就可以達(dá)到字?jǐn)?shù)。然后分開(kāi)兩段，每段也就5～8句話。
7.多種句型反復(fù)練習(xí)、嘗試，找到自己能夠駕馭的句子類(lèi)型。這樣的好句可以加分不少。簡(jiǎn)單句、并列句、復(fù)合句。當(dāng)然建議復(fù)合句也只是基礎(chǔ)的復(fù)合句，無(wú)需過(guò)于復(fù)雜，有時(shí)候牽強(qiáng)用上反而礙事。
8. 平時(shí)注意多積累記敘文、故事方面的詞匯、句型和句段、豐富自己的記敘文類(lèi)英語(yǔ)語(yǔ)言的材料庫(kù)?？荚囍杏贸龅氐赖挠⒄Z(yǔ)句子，老師一定會(huì)很欣賞。
腦中先成文，落筆就一氣呵成。相對(duì)簡(jiǎn)單部分，直接書(shū)寫(xiě)在答卷上；重點(diǎn)部分可以先在草稿紙上寫(xiě)一下，斟酌一下詞句的使用，然后謄抄上去。
表達(dá)分享
腳部動(dòng)作：
1. Then Lisa stood up and made her way through the crowd toward me.
2. Lisa planted her feet firmly in front of me.
3. She managed to climb onto it and waited patiently.
4. Reuben ran/rushed down Water Street, trembling with great panic.
5. The shadows were lengthening when Reuben arrived at（動(dòng)作） the?factory.
6. Then, clutching the tin can, he headed for the shop.
7. Racing home, Reuben burst through the front door.
8. Disappointed and frustrated, the poor man made his way back to his?family.
9. Suddenly, the woman stood up and entered the house in tears.
10. And yet, they all just stood there staring at me, motionless.
11. Belle Ringer nodded thoughtfully, and Frannie hurried off to wait on the?rest of her tables.
12. I led them toward a large corner booth. I could feel the rest of the staff following behind as we marched through the dining room.
13. I dragged myself through daily chores, feeling exhausted.
14. The elderly man fled away with great panic.
15. The man stepped back/stepped onto the platform to take a good look at the paintings.?
16. He leapt to his feet and rushed out of the living room.
17. He sprung from his chair and rushed to pick up the telephone.
18. He jumped up and rushed out of the living room.
19. She just sat there staring into space
20. The kids sat around a campfire
21. Please remain seated until your name is called.
22. He seated himself comfortably at the foot of the bed.
23. He took his usual seat at the front of the classroom.
24. That man is hurt, he's limping.
25. He was so drunk that he staggered all the way home.
26. She stumbled upstairs and into bed.
27. She tiptoed to the bed so as not to wake the baby.
28. They strolled around the park.
29. They enjoy wandering through the countryside.
30. He paced up and down the platform, waiting for the train.
31. Demonstrators marched through the streets of the city.
32. A baby crawls before he can walk.
33. Paul decided to edge away from the crowd.
34. The cat crept silently towards the bird.
35. The boy sneaked in without paying.
36. I must dash or I'll miss the train.
37. She goes jogging every day.
38. He tripped over the step and fell.
39. The group hiked up to the top of the hill.
40. As I was sitting in the park, I watched as couples seemed to meander around happily.
? 手上動(dòng)作：
1. Stunned, I stood up and gave her an awkward hug / hugged her in an awward way.
2. Speechless, she smiled radiantly and gathered her son into her arms.
3. The nearer it got, the more she waved the yellow blouse wildly .
4. The man took the sacks, reached into his pocket and placed four coins in Reuben's hand.
5. Then, clutching the tin can, he headed for the shop.
6. He parked down the street from Bobby's house, and rushed to his front door, trembling with excitement.
7. The man gently wrapped the gift in brown paper and placed the parcel in Reuben's hands.
8. Dora lifted the lid, tears beginning to blur her vision.
9. Seeing no other people notice us, I placed the Christmas present down and pounded his doorbell.
10. She didn't say a word, but smiled a watery smile and held my hand tightly.
11. As we shook hands with the new owners, I told them how fortunate they were.
12. He patted my head, and inquired: “Is there anything particular you want?”
13. He was squeezing my wrist so hard that it ached.
14. She stroked her fingers through my hair, and said: “Of course there is a Santa Clause.”
15. She handed the napkin to me, and three $20 bills fell onto my desk when I opened it.
16. Stevie looked at me, and then at his mother, then pulled out one of the napkins.
17. The class clapped warmly as Mr. Lee presented me with the reward.
18. He reached into his pocket and withdrew a note.
19. Mrs. Damon pointed to the quotation from Albert Einstein hanging on the wall.
20. Calmly he picked up the brush and started again to whitewash.
21.?She nervously fingered her collar.
22. He stroked the cat and patted the dog
23. She tapped him on the shoulder.
24. He grasped my hand and we ran
25. She grabbed her briefcase and ran to the bus stop
26. The thief snatched the handbag and disappeared into the crowd.
27. Press the button.
28. Please handle the goods with great care。
29. George stood silently with his arms folded.
? 情感描寫(xiě)：
1.喜樂(lè)
① The smile on her face shone like a diamond.她臉上的笑容像鉆石一樣閃閃發(fā)光。
② A smile of understanding flashed across his face.他臉上露出了一種理解的微笑。
③ ?A ripple of excitement ran through them.一陣激動(dòng)聲穿過(guò)他們。
④ ?Laughter lingered around the room.笑聲在房間里縈繞。
⑤ His eyes twinkled with pleasure.他的眼睛閃爍著快樂(lè)。
⑥ A wild gaiety（快樂(lè)） took hold of her.一種瘋狂的快樂(lè)控制了她。
⑦ Unforgettable were her eyes that shone like diamonds and lips held in a steady smile.令人難忘的是她的眼睛像鉆石一樣閃閃發(fā)光，嘴角保持著穩(wěn)定的微笑。
⑧ ?I was wild with joy.我欣喜若狂。
⑨ ?I was pleased beyond description.我高興得難以形容。
⑩ ?She wore a shining smile on her face.她臉上帶著燦爛的笑容。
? Her smile lit up the whole room.她的笑容照亮了整個(gè)房間。
? She shed tears of joy.她高興得流下了眼淚。
? Her eyes were sparkling like diamonds.她的眼睛閃著鉆石般的光芒。
? She was overflowing with happiness.她洋溢著幸福。
? Her flushed face was shining with excitement.她激動(dòng)得滿臉通紅。
? Joy welled up inside her.她心中涌起喜悅。
? I was floating on air.我漂浮在空中。
? Amusement gleamed in his eyes.他眼睛流露出愉快的神情。
?2.憤怒：
① I was seized by anger.我充滿了憤怒。
② He was fuming with rage.他氣得大發(fā)雷霆。
③ His anger boiled over.他的憤怒爆發(fā)了。
④ He could hardly/scarcely contain his rage.他幾乎控制不住怒火。
⑤ He was breathing fire and fury.他充滿著怒火。
⑥ His voice trembled with anger.他的聲音因憤怒而顫抖。
⑦ He gave me a look of burning anger.他憤怒地看了我一眼。
⑧ He glared at me with burning eyes.他用灼熱的目光怒視著我。
⑨ He flared up at the word.他一聽(tīng)到這個(gè)字就勃然大怒。
⑩ His face clouded with anger.他氣得臉色陰沉。
?3.悲傷煩惱
?①He stood silently, tears rolling down his cheeks.他靜靜地站著，眼淚順著面頰流了下來(lái)。
② I feel like I am floating in an ocean of sadness.我漂浮在悲傷的海洋里。
③Her hands were shaking. She was on the verge of tears.她的手在顫抖。她快要哭了。
④Hearing the news, so desperate was he that he drowned sadness in wine.聽(tīng)到這個(gè)消息，他絕望地把悲傷淹沒(méi)在酒里。
⑤ She burst into tears and ran out of the room.她突然哭了起來(lái)，跑出了房間。
⑥ She sobbed, hiding her face in her hands.她掩面哭泣。
⑦? I tried to fight back tears. ?/My eyes were filled with tears.
我努力忍住眼淚。/ 我的眼里充滿了淚水。
⑧ A frown（皺眉）now stood on his face.他皺起了眉頭。
⑨ They sat there with glum looks on their faces. ??他們坐在那里，帶著一臉憂郁。?
⑩ The news cast a cloud of gloom over his face.這消息使他臉上蒙上了一層陰影。
? He brimmed over with sorrow when...他滿是悲傷……
? They were immersed in sorrow.他們沉浸在悲痛之中。
? These days he was in low spirits.這些日子他情緒低落。
?4.害怕：
①He turned to me, with his eyes full of horror.他轉(zhuǎn)過(guò)身來(lái)，眼里充滿了恐懼。
②Fear slowly creeps upon her.恐懼慢慢地蔓延到她身上。
③She was struck with horror when...她感到恐懼……
④She was choked by fear.她因恐懼而窒息。
⑤Her face turned pale and stood there tongue-tied.她臉色蒼白地站在那里，舌頭打結(jié)。
⑥A flood of fear welled up in him. / Fear flooded over him.
他心中涌起一陣恐懼。?/ 恐懼淹沒(méi)了他。
⑦Her heart beat so violently that she felt nearly suffocated（窒息）.
她的心跳得厲害，幾乎窒息而死。
⑧She shook all over, feeling like sitting on pins and needles.
?她渾身顫抖，覺(jué)得如坐針氈。
5. 感動(dòng)：
① Touched deeply/immensely, we…被深深感動(dòng)，我們……
②Tears filling her eyes, she offered her heartfelt gratitude.她熱淚盈眶，表示衷心的感謝。
③ With tears streaming down her face, she... 淚水順著她的臉頰流了下來(lái)，……